Research and Planning 13/20 (C) Production 47/60 (B)
You have completed sound research into similar products and the target audience. Detailed draft work is evident. To improve further include more detail in your analysis of similar magazines, and summarise what you found out about the conventions of music magazines from your research.
Your product makes effective use of font, colour, layout, and images. To improve further tidy up the bottom coverline on the front cover (Live Lounge). Remove the Mumford and Sons album cover - all material must be original. On the double page spread consider using a standfirst to fill the space beneath Exclusive. You may want to remove the Reading festival line-up and have something that relates to the article (e.g. a fact file about the artist).
Research and Planning 13/20 (C)
ReplyDeleteProduction 47/60 (B)
You have completed sound research into similar products and the target audience. Detailed draft work is evident. To improve further include more detail in your analysis of similar magazines, and summarise what you found out about the conventions of music magazines from your research.
Your product makes effective use of font, colour, layout, and images. To improve further tidy up the bottom coverline on the front cover (Live Lounge). Remove the Mumford and Sons album cover - all material must be original. On the double page spread consider using a standfirst to fill the space beneath Exclusive. You may want to remove the Reading festival line-up and have something that relates to the article (e.g. a fact file about the artist).